my opinon about James and the gianit peach

           I think James and the giant peach is an good novel for children it has good characters and each charaters has an good personality but the story need more action or excitment to the story  it should have sequal of james and the giant peach.

James and the giant peach comprehension 3

Script writting
James and the giant peach
 After the shark start atacking the giant peach the colosal bug look at James with pathetical hopeful look

James:I think i got an idea........we cound capture sea gulls tie a thread/string around the neck and the other end to the stem of the peach.

Other characters: ridiculous! Absurd! Poppycock! Balderdash! Madness!
Grasshopper: but we need hundreds of sea gulls to lift the giant peach, hundreds may be more
James: But there is no shortage of seagulls
Earthworm: Are you crazy!, how will we catch that many?
James: Using bait, worm, luckily we have the biggest worm in the world
Earthworm: Stop..stop..I won't do it(scared about the idea)
Grasshopper: Why don't we listen to the plan first?(Grass hopper eager to know the plan)
Earthworm: I will not be killed  by any seagulls right?(talking with a bit of fear)
James: I'll promise(james promises to the earth worm)
James: Come on, let's start...let's go to position.(talked happly)
Then the bugs did James plan hundred times until they caught 501 seagulls. Then the peach was lifted.
Every Character: Hooray...hoorray...(cheer with joy)
Miss Spider and silk worms were tired after doing James plan.

James and the giant peach comprehension 1

James and the giant peach                                    
comprehension 1


Once upon a time there is a young boy name James Henry Trotter. He once had a happy life when his parents were alive. James parent died because an angry rhino from the london zoo ran all over his parents they were dead in 35 seconds flat.After James sad lost of his lost of his parents he was force to live gruling aunts.



James now live at an steep hill on creepy house and an garden that that do not grow fruit.His aunts name’s are aunt Sponge and aunt Spiker,Aunt Sponge is an fat short woman with a white flabby face with piggy eyes and very vain. Aunt Spiker is much taller then aunt Sponge but she is very lean,bony,wet narrow eyes,an screeching vocie loves to were steal rimmed glassesis very greedy with money both are very cruel to James never call him by his name.



On one night James was order to stay and sleep outside because poor James did not do his chores like the aunt order.outside he was crying so much.Coming out from the dark an odd looking man came out from the dark he was bald , the odd looking bald guy gave James stone or gem of the size of a grain of rice.the odd guy quoted “do not lose an single one of it” then the odd man disapered .Not long after that James trip then the bag and the gem fell out and went to the ground and james was to slow to get it.james was so sad he left lost hope.



The next day aunt Spiker realize that the peach tree had an fruit and the fruit keep growing. James ,aunt Spiker, aunt Spiker was so happy to she the fruit.soon later the peach stop growing .then aunt Spiker had an idea to use it to make money. People from all round the world want to see the giant peach but aunt Spiker and aunt Spiker lock James because they thought that He will get in there way. After the first day at night those wicked aunt order hin to clean up the mess the people that visted the giant peach at the garden. The peach has a hole made by an animal, James thought. So James went to the hole and follow it to the end. At the end he saw a gigantic bugs.



END OF PART ONE. .......

WHAT WILL JAMES DO??

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